tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post7398352661028251225..comments2023-03-31T07:41:29.866-07:00Comments on Writters gamings!: Arbitor - #fridayflashAngushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15979316041864291842noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-76912996681325901662010-07-21T16:59:26.298-07:002010-07-21T16:59:26.298-07:00Well, that's an action-packed tale. Thanks Ang...Well, that's an action-packed tale. Thanks Angus.Donald Conradhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11299995538611948494noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-15091932424481526362010-07-13T10:15:49.649-07:002010-07-13T10:15:49.649-07:00Cool and action filled piece of flash! Welcome to ...Cool and action filled piece of flash! Welcome to #fridayflash. :)Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-12755905261400939932010-07-12T09:11:43.211-07:002010-07-12T09:11:43.211-07:00AWSOME.. that was a great read Angus. What a surpr...AWSOME.. that was a great read Angus. What a surprise it must have been for him to turn and encounter a beast like that. I am glad to have good win over evil. I'd enjoy reading more adventures with John Creemon as the hero.Optomistichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04466362430067418073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-79186156762773417592010-07-11T15:18:27.713-07:002010-07-11T15:18:27.713-07:00Welcome to #fridayflash! Good little action scene ...Welcome to #fridayflash! Good little action scene you have there. Nicely done!Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-29908008428654380762010-07-10T13:03:13.573-07:002010-07-10T13:03:13.573-07:00Wicked!Wicked!Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-76645961161147558182010-07-10T12:48:33.103-07:002010-07-10T12:48:33.103-07:00Well done and welcome to #fridayflash!Well done and welcome to #fridayflash!Virginia Moffatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12071059148315715405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-42265120827563902522010-07-10T11:12:04.440-07:002010-07-10T11:12:04.440-07:00I've heard noises that I thought were caused b...I've heard noises that I thought were caused by the creaking house. I'm sure glad this didn't happen to me! I'll be thinking about your story the next time I hear late night creaks. Your description of the creature was horrifying. Great job, Gus, and welcome to #fridayflash.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-22400472601945878992010-07-10T09:39:38.313-07:002010-07-10T09:39:38.313-07:00Ah... nice one, brother. Love the brevity of it. W...Ah... nice one, brother. Love the brevity of it. Welcome to the club.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-18503466142358840122010-07-10T08:41:57.265-07:002010-07-10T08:41:57.265-07:00Awesome story. Great descriptions and totally cred...Awesome story. Great descriptions and totally credible fight scene. Welcome to #fridayflash!Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-89846091426056014022010-07-10T08:09:25.128-07:002010-07-10T08:09:25.128-07:00Cathy - your boy used cuss words. Take his X-box a...Cathy - your boy used cuss words. Take his X-box away as punishment!<br /><br />Seriously this is a great story. Welcome to the community Gus<br /><br />marc nashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-18207460682595231732010-07-10T07:46:20.658-07:002010-07-10T07:46:20.658-07:00Great pacing & action! I see thriller writing ...Great pacing & action! I see thriller writing in your future. Congrats on your first #fridayflash and keep writing! :-)shannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17063218369150683990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-59496376053757904882010-07-10T07:24:56.713-07:002010-07-10T07:24:56.713-07:00Your first flash? Yea! That's so exciting!
I...Your first flash? Yea! That's so exciting! <br /><br />It looks like writer's chops run in your family. ;)<br /><br />Well, done! :DKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11410730283603224430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-48712413891598147602010-07-10T05:47:52.082-07:002010-07-10T05:47:52.082-07:00So, I'm not commenting because your mom sugges...So, I'm not commenting because your mom suggested to on her blog. I'm commenting because your short story is really, really, good! You have a definite talent for writing. I don't belong to your mom's #fridayflash group (couldn't write my way out of wet paper bag) but you certainly are of that caliber. Good on you! <br />Because your description of the beast was well done, when reading the part "You will die", the beast said in a cold, hard voice .. I totally heard Darth Vader in my head. And the line 'The pretty caressed armour shined in his eyes' terrific description.<br />You've got talent!Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14013998783032868744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-26861181993173349232010-07-10T04:42:34.558-07:002010-07-10T04:42:34.558-07:00Wow, that 14 year old was quite the hero! You real...Wow, that 14 year old was quite the hero! You really write description quite well. Well done!<br /><br />And welcome to #fridayflash. :)Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-59616892759174415032010-07-10T04:40:34.850-07:002010-07-10T04:40:34.850-07:00"the grip quickly seemed to form a type of bl..."the grip quickly seemed to form a type of blue sword filled with energy with two tips and nothing between." -- awesome!<br />Some great imagination here.<br />Welcome to #fridayflash, I hope you'll stay a while!mazzz_in_Leedshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01498100483681096442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-51377932694750878992010-07-10T03:16:06.043-07:002010-07-10T03:16:06.043-07:00That's a great debut to #fridayflash, Gusie. T...That's a great debut to #fridayflash, Gusie. That was pretty good action with John jumping on the back of the beast.Alan W. Davidsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17067022519729701245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-48824927072738438552010-07-10T02:36:03.842-07:002010-07-10T02:36:03.842-07:00The action hooked me straight away, great writing....The action hooked me straight away, great writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-28444953167194804792010-07-10T01:38:43.456-07:002010-07-10T01:38:43.456-07:00Great action! Welcome to #FridayFlash! :)Great action! Welcome to #FridayFlash! :)Marihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07303695124956391293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-16886399533553699832010-07-09T20:29:34.767-07:002010-07-09T20:29:34.767-07:00Great first #FridayFlash! I hope you will continue...Great first #FridayFlash! I hope you will continue to participate :-)<br />~2Tomara Armstronghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17185889402088565686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-60349070102375823142010-07-09T20:07:31.512-07:002010-07-09T20:07:31.512-07:00Whoa! Action there. Get that big ol' whatever ...Whoa! Action there. Get that big ol' whatever it is...welcome man!Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-78715213216731879512010-07-09T19:51:54.587-07:002010-07-09T19:51:54.587-07:00What fun! That's a lot of action in a few word...What fun! That's a lot of action in a few words. Well done, and welcome to #fridayflash. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-85796585643036093942010-07-09T19:33:44.738-07:002010-07-09T19:33:44.738-07:00That was a fun read. Welcome to #fridayflash.
~jon...That was a fun read. Welcome to #fridayflash.<br />~jonJ. M. Strotherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01117770768990691070noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5284920922674702091.post-21092141649885755742010-07-09T19:26:59.559-07:002010-07-09T19:26:59.559-07:00Your first #fridayflash! How amazing and awesome. ...Your first #fridayflash! How amazing and awesome. And so well written! I particularly liked this: "The pretty caressed armour shined in his eyes." Well done! Congratulations Gus, and welcome to #fridayflash!<br />Love, Mom!Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.com